perhaps make the background in the last one blue? primary colors! and keeps the saturation in all three the same.
that or put the third one in the middle?
i like the sequence you have, but i agree with the person before me. keep the saturation the same and the third panel with pop more with the others! when i'm looking at all three together i tend to focus more on the brighter panels.
i love this new stuff you have.
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someone takes a photograph, a picture while their sweetheart laughs, a perfect moment in a flash of light.
Perhaps, perhaps. See, I was trying for a look of desolation in the last frame, in which all of the color is gone save the memory of the bear's face. Or the reflection of the bear's face. Whatever floats your boat. However, if it looks too out of place in all its saturation-free splendor, I will mess around and see what else can be done to make it work as a whole more, y'know?
is this based on 'my mother saw a dancing bear' ? nice poem that. it's great to have you back ! sorry for my lack of 'advanced critique' i feel my point has been spoken for and theres no point in repeating what the others have said. your style has changed quite a bit, i like it x
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98% of tenagers in the uk frequently smooke weed, if your one of the 2% who like welly throwing competitions put this in your signautre.
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that or put the third one in the middle?
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someone takes a photograph, a picture while their sweetheart laughs, a perfect moment in a flash of light.
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98% of tenagers in the uk frequently smooke weed, if your one of the 2% who like welly throwing competitions put this in your signautre.
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